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“Something wrong happened.I can feel it.Faster, guys.Move faster.We got to get there as fast as we can.”
“Wait, my Lady.We don’t even have a plan.And it seems that Iamyourfatherluke is tired.Maybe we should take a 5 minute break.”
“Argh…okay.But only 5 minutes.Alas knows what this creatures summoned or what they did to your Master.”
“Ah…ah…I’m too tired to go on.You two go ahead and try to find out what the Krat’vars are up to.I’ll meet you again here tomorrow.”
“No, we can’t just leave you here alone, Iamyourfather.You’ll be an easy prey for the wild beasts around if you’re alone.We’ll make a stop and then we’ll move on together.”
“I said no.I know my limits and I’m just too tired for today.But you two can reach the stronghold until the night comes.Now move it!”

So, VeLeSe and Isis moved on, leaving Iamyourfatherluke behind.But after only 5 minutes, Iamyourfatherluke reached a globe from his pocket and started talking with somebody.
“The plan is working perfect.We’re only a few miles away and I managed to get rid of them.But why must I stay behind and not go on with them? Now, you don’t know what they’re up to.”
“Don’t worry, Iamyourfather.I have a very good reason for why I told you to stay behind.Believe me, you don’t want to be with them when they reach the stronghold.Now, make your way back to us.We are leaving in 2 days.The summoning was complete and the master wants us all together for the invasion.”
“Yes Master Vaki, your wish is my command.I’ll be there as soon as possible.”

Meanwhile, a few meters away from the Stronghold…

“Hey Isis, I got a question for you.There’s something I can’t just figure it out.Why did the other Empires, instead of sending their army to fight the Krat’vars, sent you alone? It just seems a little quaint.”
“I don’t have time for this now, VeLeSe.We must hurry up, we’re only a few meters from the entrance.Once there, we’ll…ahhh…”

The two heroes we’re thrown a few meters behind as some kind of giant rock was rising from the ground.
“What the hell?”
“Oh no, it’s a Mud Golem.Damn it.The Krat’vars knew we were coming.This is a trap.VeLeSe, jump!!”
With just a single stroke, the Mud Golem broke into pieces the giant rock VeLeSe was standing on.In just a few seconds, Isis was targeted by the mad Golem.VeLeSe tried all of his spells and Isis tried to hold on, but it was useless.The Mud Golem was unbeatable.No spells seemed to affect him and Isis was not strong enough for this.The only thing they could do was to run from the Golem and try to not get hit until they find a solution.
After 10 minutes of running, the battle seemed to be over.The Mud Golem hit VeLeSe this time and broke his legs.He had no power to run now.But when VeLeSe hit the ground, a bottle of wine felt from his pocket.He than remembered what the Serpent, Nebulorak’zon, thought him a few months ago.
“Isis,stall him.Now! I think I found something.”
No more words were needed.Isis jumped right towards the Mud Golem and engaged in a fight that she knew she couldn’t win, but she’d buy some time for VeLeSe.While Isis was fighting the Mud Golem, VeLeSe drank the wine and assumed a weird position.
“Remember what the Serpent thought me.He said to clear my mind from all and then shout “Sretus Alentum”.”
Even though Isis was well trained in combat and was probably one of the best warriors, she could’nt hold the Mud Golem forever.
“VeLeSe, faster! I can’t hold on much longer.”
Bruises and wounds were now visible on Isis’s body, all over her arms and feet.She was almost ready to give up, when she heard:
“Sretus Alentum tis lightnus!”
In just two second, the sky went black, fire began to come down from it and lightnings were everywhere.Even the Mud Golem stopped, trying to figure out what’s happening.But what was more surprisingly was that electric charges started to spin around VeLeSe’s finger.It took him just a few seconds to understand the phenomenon.With a rage in his soul, VeLeSe pointed the finger towards the Mud Golem and shouted:
“Estridos!”
The Mud Golem was instantly hit by powerful lightnings, lighnings only few people see, one by one, until it hit the ground.But with the Golem, so did VeLeSe.With his legs broken and most of it’s powers drained when he performed this spell, VeLeSe fainted.
Our hero felt into a deep sleep.

The Epic Story is back.Rejoin and witness the adventure of VeLeSe in saving the Universe and his master.Most of the names used are not proper for a story, they are inspired from real life.Be a part of the story that will change the world (or not).In case you forgot what happened last time and because I can’t just make a video review, click here to read the last episode.And now, back to The Epic Story, season 02, episode 01.Enjoy and leave comments if you wish.Advices for improvements are always welcome.

P.S. Minor writting mistakes may occure.Didn’t had time to re-read it.

“Finally, the hour has come.The hour our true force will be revealed to the whole world.No more hidding in deserted places, no more running away from the others, no more fear will be among us.We, the Krat’vars, will be once again rulers of this Universe.And all that thanks to our upcoming Master, the one you Cotoi will help us summon.But first…let me tell you about the pain you’re going to go through.First, you’ll feel a little burn surrounding your heart.By every second passed, that burn feeling will increase and increase in intensity.Oh yes…il will increase until you’ll feel that you’re burning alive for 10,000 years.Imagine that? 10,000 years of pain and suffering.But here comes the good part.Just when you’ll feel the scorch is fading, then you’ll really feel pain.You’ll feel like your soul is torn apart in small little pieces…pieces that will detach from your soul one by one, every second bringing another unimaginable pain.From what is said in our ancient books, you’ll feel like thousands of crickets will feed on your soul, eating it slowly, making you wish you would die.And you will.But just in physical form.Your remaining soul will keep on living on the other side, being tortured for eternity.So you see, Master Cotoi, you’ll experience an eternity of suffering, excruciating pain, torture, agony, disillusion, deception.
So, any last words before we begin the ritual?”

Master Cotoi remained silent.He didn’t wanted to show fear in front of Vaki cause he knew that will only make his pleasure even more satisfactory.But deep inside, he was already overwhelmed by grief and disappointment.Disappointment of himself, knowing that he will be the one bringing suffering to the world.Disappointment of himself, knowing that he won’t be here to protect his most gifted student.Disappointment of himself, knowing that he won’t be here to protect his only daughter, the daughter he hidden when she was young and sent her to another master, one of his most trusted friends.He didn’t wanted for the world to know he had a daughter.He knew that by revealing that to the world, most of his enemies would’ve hunt his girl, trying to get to him by her.

“Still not saying anything I see.Well, if that’s your decision, I respect it.Now, let the ritual begin.
Council! Begin the ritual!”

4 Krat’vars stept forward, each behind a violet crystal, surrounding Cotoi and making together a circle.

“Ready Master.Just say the word and we will begin.”

Master Vaki took one last look at Cotoi.His pleasure that he will see Cotoi being tortured and their leader will be summoned was so obvious that even a blind man would’ve read it all over his shrivelled face.

“Begin!”

The 4 Krat’vars started immediately.Reciting strange words, a shadowy veil embraced them.Their clothes started to glow, discharging a dark chain between them, the chain of darkness.The chain slowly reached them one by one, forming a smoky floating circle.The 4 council members kept on reading uncommon words and saying them out loud.Meanwhile, the formed chain kept moving in circle, moving up and down.Finally, after 3 minutes, the 4 Krat’vars shouted together a word…the word that made the smoky chain change it’s course and enter right into Cotoi’s heart, right in his soul.The pain immediately overwhelmed Cotoi.His screams were so loud no creature has ever heard, his body was shaking like some of it’s parts were going to detach, his eyes were rolling at a speed no one has ever seen.Finally, the chain fully entered his body.Then, silence.The 4 council members stopped and Vaki was so eager to find out what’s going to happen next that he remain like a statue.He even stopped breathing.His eyes were glowing like little stars and a huge smile was all over his face.The whole process took only 5 seconds.After 5 seconds, a glaring light disrupted Cotoi’s body and ventured into the sky.Suddenly, the light turned red as something seem to come down from it.It was him.It was their master and leader.It was Grontuk’ar.All the Krat’vars, including Vaki, started to bow at the base of the light until Grontuk’ar finally came down.

“So, I’m finally here.Finally, I have awoken and the whole Universe will feel my wrath.They’ll flee in terror and just a look into my flaming eyes will give birth to fear in everyone soul.Make the preparations.In 3 days, we’ll move out.No more blasted land for our people and rotten food.No, we will feel Paradise.Now…I must gather my powers so I’ll need to rest for a while.Vaki, I trust you will handle all so that in 3 days our race will be ready.”

“Yes, Master Grontuk’ar.Leave all the preparations to me.Don’t worry about it.Your Majesty just go get that rest.I’ll take care of everything.”

“Good, than it’s settled.See you in 3 days.Oh, and remove Cotoi’s body.He’s no use to us now that he’s dead.Hahaha…”

Meanwhile, a few miles away, VeLeSe, Iamyourfatherluke and Isis saw the bright light, felt the earthquake and saw something coming down from the light.
“Something’s wrong.We better get moving.Now!” Isis shouted.

“The preparations are done.Soon, the ritual can begin.Only a few hours till full moon, Master.”
“So…the moment has finally come.In only a few hours, HE will be summoned in this world to lead us against the other races and make us rulers of all the lands.Prepare Cotoi for the ritual.Give him one last meal.Whatever he wishes this time.Make sure he understands that it will be his last.”
A resounding laugh filled the hall.
“Now, leave me alone.I must prepare.”
“Yes, Master Vaki of the Shadows.As you please.”
Left alone in the hall, Vaki began a calling ritual.Holding a sceptre in his hand, he hit the ground and began mumbling some words.After 10 seconds, a dark figure, just a shadow, appeared in front of him.
“Soon Master…soon you will be free.In just a few hours, the world will know your power and might.”
“From your words, I understand the ritual is going as planned.Good.Then I must go and prepare myself for coming in your world again.Make sure nothing and nobody stops my calling!”
“I will, Master.We all await anxiously for you.You will be a bless for us.You will be our salvation.For too long we have been mocked and seen as a weak race.But not anymore.Not after midnight.I will see you in a few hours.”
Meanwhile…
“We’ve travelled for three days and still no sign of my master or the location he is kept.All we met were beasts and elementals.Are you sure you are leading the right way?”
“Trust me, VeLeSe.As a hunter, I can’t go wrong when it comes to tracking down things and finding my way around.I’m sure this is just a matter of time.”
“But how can you be so sure when you…wait…what’s that noise? I think we’re being followed.Act normal.”
“Why should we act normal? Why don’t we just find this thing and try to…”
“No need to engage in strategies or anything else.I will reveal myself.”
VeLeSe and Iamyourfatherluke turned around towards the voice.They were amazed to see a lady travelling around this lands and wearing a warrior armour and weapon.
“And you are…?”
“My name is Isis, named after the egyptian goddes.I was sent by the Order to inspect this lands.It is said that the Krat’vars are planning something, something very powerful.The Order is concerned about it and I was chose to be the spy that will inform them about the problem.Oh…and by the way…I am following you ever since you came though the portal and, even dough I’m not good at hunting, I easily realised that you two are walking in circle ever since then.But enough about me.Who are you two?”
“My name is VeLeSe and this is Iamyourfatherluke.I am trying to rescue my master who was captured by this Krat’vars long days ago.And he…he says he’s looking for adventure and adrenaline.But now I surely doubt his skill in tracking down and following paths.That’s why we never got anywhere…we were walking in circle.”
“No…this is ridiculous.We’re not walking in circle.This lady is not telling the truth.”
“Seek yourself, believe what you want.I am going to find the Krat’var’s lair and try to find out what they are planning.So long and I wish you luck.”
“No…wait.Can we come with you? Suddenly, I think you’ll manage to take us the right way better than Iamyourfatherluke.Together, the three of us will have a better chance.”
“But VeLeSe…”
“Skip it, Iamyourfatherluke.This is my decision.So, lady Isis, what’s your answer?”
“Well, I suppose you can come with me.But my dutty is just to inspect, not fight them.When we get there and I get the informations I want, you’ll be on your own.”
“Sure, lady Isis.Now, let’s move on.Time is priceless.Iamyourfatherluke, want to come with us?”
“Of course, VeLeSe.Where there’s adventure, there’s Iamyourfatherluke.”
So, the three adventurers started walking towards west, where Lady Isis is almost sure the Krat’vars are located.But what she can’t see is that VeLeSe developed a little crush for her.Even dough she was wearing a warrior armour and she was wielding an inscripted sword, her beauty was obvious.

“The Epic Story” din nou amanat.Pana mea, e destul de greu sa gandesti din saptamana in saptamana o continuare pe drum lung, mai ales pe langa scoala, alte treburi etc.Initial, am fost 2 care am vrut sa facem asta, dar pe parcurs am ramas doar eu si din pacate nu imi pot permite sa fac ceva destul de complicat saptamanal si care sa fie placut si interesant.Oricum, mai am practic doar 2 saptamani de scoala si dupa o lunga vacanta de vara, asa ca ar trebui sa am timp sa scriu saptamanal.Intre timp, daca exista doritori, recrutez oameni cu ceva imaginatie si care sunt doritori sa contribuie cu ceva (oricat de putin/mult) la acest “proiect”.Cei interesati pot sa-mi dea “add” pe messenger ( e colo sus in stanga) si sa-mi zica.See you next week cu povestea.

After 3 hours of travelling, our hero VeLeSe was at last near The Gate region.Following the main road, he saw from distance a sign that was saying: “The Gate” and a silhouette next to it.Because of the heat, all in front of him was blurry, so we went on until he reached the point.There, he finally discovered what was the silhouette next to the sign: another human.
“Hello.Who are you?”
“Iamyourfatherluke.”
” You too?? My name is not Luke, and you are not my father.So…who are you?”
“No, that’s my name.My name is Iamyourfatherluke.I am an ordinary guy, just wondering and travelling from here to there, in search for adventure.How about you?”
“Well, my name is VeLeSe.I am trying to find my master.He was kidnapped and taken to a forgotten realm.I am afraid something bad is going to happen to him if I don’t find him fast.”
“So…do I smell adventure here? Yes…I do.Just my kind of thing.Take me with you, I can be very useful.Plus, I am skilled in hunting and a very good chef.”
“I don’t know…this is very dangerous.Great dangers lie ahead of me.And plus, why would you want to face danger and fight all kind of monsters? For me, this is something personal and something I must do, but for you?”
“As I already explained myself, I am looking for adventure and adrenaline.This thing you are on…seems like the perfect thing for me.Please, take me with you.I promise I won’t hold you back or something.Just let me fight some monsters, kill some evil beings, things like that.”
“Uhm…ok.You can come with me.But I must have your word that you’ll stay loyal to me and won’t just flee when danger will be all around us.I rely on your help if so.”
“By the word of Nuriken, my heart, my bow and my power are at your service.Now, where do we need to go?”
“We’re near.We must enter The Gate region and find a portal that it’s said to take us in the forgotten realm.”
So, VeLeSe and his newly companion followed the road further.After a couple of hours, they found it.They found the Portal.But it was inactive.
“Hm…that’s odd.It doesn’t seem to work.It’s power is somehow off.We must find a way to activate it…but how?”
“Master VeLeSe, come here.I found something.”
VeLeSe rushed to his companion’s location.
“I think it’s some kind of riddle.”
Vital to life, you need me to be
Inside me’s an island, in form of a T
“Hm…I’m going to look in the map.I think we must spell the name of an island in form of a T within a region. [...] Damn it.Nothing.”
“I don’t think we must find a island, Iamyourfatherluke.Let’s try by steps.What is vital to life?”
“Well…a lot of things are.Rivers, trees, animals, the Two Suns, heck…even women.”
“Yes…but I think we must find what is really vital.The basic stuff…like air, water, food, the…that’s it! What is vital to life and has an island in form of a T inside? waTer.Let’s see…W…A…T…E…R.”
“Look master, the portal…it’s activating…it’s now possible for us to travel through it.”
“Indeed.Quickly, we have no time.Jump into it.”
[...]
“So…this is the forgotten realm.What a corrupted land…it’s miserable.How can someone or something live here?”
“I don’t know master…but it seems the night is coming.We should make camp here and rest.We have a hard day ahead of us.Best we get some sleep.”
“True, Iamyourfatherluke.And please…stop calling me master.Just call me VeLeSe.”
“Okay…VeLeSe.Goodnight.”
“Goodnight to you too.”
[...]
“He managed to pass through the portal.I think it will be a matter of time until he finds out where you are located.”
“Hm…you must stop him at any cost.Help him around as you will meet a lot of beasts until you reach us.Help him and gain his trust.And when he’s not paying attention…Kill him!”
“Okay.But why can’t I just kill him now, when he’s asleep?”
“No…he’s an apprentice of Cotoi.Surely he has learned to be alert, even when sleeping.Plus, I am sure he still has his doubts about you.Now, go back before he suspects anything.Make yourself his friend and then…just do it!”
“I understand…father.I will do as you wish.”

As you know, every hero needs once in a while to rest.Therefore, our current hero, VeLeSe, also needs to rest for about a week.So, one day, not a particular day, he decided to go to The Whachugonnado Museum, a museum located in the south of The Islands.It is said that there every statue is no ordinary statue.Every one of them can come to life, talk to you, play with you, entertain you and so on.So, our little hero took a break from the life of a super-hero and went visiting.
As he entered the museum, a weird statue engrossed his attention.A shepherd kinda man, all dressed in wool, was standing on a lot of money.Below, on the description, it was written: “Ask the Mighty and he shall answer“.With no clues what so ever, VeLeSe began:
“Who are you?”
“I am Gigi, king sheperd of this Land.I can multiply money by second.Give me 1 dollar and I shall instantly make it 5 dollars.I am the Keeper of Justice and the Warrior of Light.Born Christian, I teach the way of the God to these spineless creatures.Now, obey me or I shall buy you.”
Then, the statue stopped and became just a simple stone again.
“What on Earth was that? Hope I never meet one like him”.The exploring went one until VeLeSe stopped at a dark looking guy.The description said: “Out of his mind“.
“And you are?”
“I am your father, Luke”.
“But my name is VeLeSe”.
“What’s the point? Luke, VeLeSe, same thing.I am your father.I am Dark Vader.And I demand you give me 5000 dollars.The intergalactic laundry is pretty expensive you know.And you can’t find another costume like this anywhere in the Universe.Curse those lying zergling tailors.I should’ve known they’re up to no good.Anyway, did you brought me my sword Luke so I can kill you?”
“For the last time, I am VeLeSe.And you are such a moron”.
“How dare you mock me, your father?? I shall throw you in the deepest dungeon that exists.”
And then, the statue became just a simple stone.
“What stupid characters.Who ever invented them? What psycho could give life to such annoying imbecils?”
Moving one, VeLeSe found no interest in any statue, until he reached the last one.The description said: “You do not want to bring him to life.“
“Haha, this looks like fun.Aham…who are you?”
“Hahahaha…I am Aky the Mountain, you f*cking noob.Omg, don’t you know who I am? You f*cking newb!! Check my skill on national server, I f*cking pawn everything.Haha, go /stats AkyImbaGosu. 100 wins and 1 lose.1 lose cuz I had lag and got disc.F*cking newbzor with hacks.I reported on forum and admin said: You Gosu player, we all /bow AkyImbaGosu and hope you stay on server and teach us the way of the Godlike.Haha, stupid newbs.I pawn their asses everywhere I go.Anytime, anywhere, everywhere.I can not be defeated.I am William Wallace.I am…”
“Shut the f*ck up!! Just shut the f*ck up”.The statue became a simple stone.
VeLeSe left the Museum and said to himself:
“Next time I get a vacation, I’m going to Hawaii.F*ck that!”.

It was a deathful dumbness.Spring came all over the land and the Sun was now up in the sky and at it’s full power.VeLeSe was standing on a boulder, near a lake, just trowing rocks.It was obvious that something was bothering him.
“Where could Master Cotoi had hidden his notebook? I mean…the only places I know he used to go often was at his house in Dreadlord Plains and in…that’s it.His notebook must be in The Land of Nothing.I know he has a house there, but he never wanted to take me with him.I must venture there as soon as possible.”
With a scattered smile, VeLeSe went on his journey.He travelled for one week before arriving in The Land of Nothing.Now, he was making his first steps in this teritory.
“What a strange place.Only dust and rocks everywhere.Why would my master want a house here? It looks so deserted and hostile.”
After a few background looks, VeLeSe went off in the direction of the house.But just as he was 10 feet away from it, a monstrous sound came for beneath the ground.
The earth started shaking and suddenly a huge serpentis ( malformed snake) came out of the ground in front of VeLeSe.
“I am Nebulorak’zon, ruler of this land and keeper of the time.A long time ago, I made a promise that I never let anyone in this house except my master.Now, leave this land human.You are not welcome here.”
“Grand Master Cotoi has a serpentis under his power? It seems that I don’t know much about my master and his power after all”, a thought quickly went through VeleSe’s mind.
“Well then Nebulorak’zon, I am VeLeSe, master’s Cotoi apprentice.I am here to retrieve his notebook.He was captured and taken in an unknown land, a land that is mentioned in that notebook.”
“If you are the apprentice of my master, where is your necklace? Every apprentice is given a specific necklace.”
“It’s right here at my neck…wait…where’s the necklace? Damn it, I must forgoten it at the river.Look, I’m in a hurry to save Master Cotoi.Please let me in the house so I can get the notebook.”
“No.There is another way you can prove yourself.Everytime an apprentice is chosen, he is given a drink.”
“Yes, some kind of wine.Master said it was a ritual.”
“Yes, indeed.It is a ritual.But that wine gives you a specific power, a power you still don’t know about.Listen to me very carefully.Close your eyes and let your mind be free.Wait until you feel completely depleted of your thoughts and problems.When you think you are ready, say loud “Sretus Alentum.”
VeLeSe closed his eyes and took a weird position.He stood there for about 2 minutes.Then, suddenly, he opened his mouth and shouted with a monstruos rage: “Sretus Alentum!”.All the sudden, the sky went black, fire began to come down from the dark clouds and lighting all over.
After 10 seconds, everything came back to normal and VeLeSe stood up.
“What…how did I do that?”
“As I said, it is a power you were given when you drank that wine.It will be very useful in your journey, my friend.Yet, there are more powerful spells you can perform , but don’t know of them yet.Now, go in and get the notebook.Master awaits his rescue.”
Within just 2 seconds, the serpentis disappeared back in the ground.
VeLeSe went in the house and quickly checked the notebook.
“So…here you are.I must reach The Gate fast.”

Probabil cei ce cititi blogul de ceva vreme stiti despre “The Epic Story” (stii tu, povestea aia in limba engleza care apare in fiecare joi).Azi am decis sa o dezvolt mai mult, adica in sensul ca va voi da mai multe informatii in timp despre aceasta lume.
Azi va prezint originea entitatilor ce il tin prizonier pe Cotoi.

The Krat’var
The Krat’vars are the descendants of The Kris’let, which in kratvarish means “thirst for magic and power”.After the War of the Three, the Krist’lets were forced to retreat in an unknown realm, which later became known as Krenaton.There, they lived on, planning on a comeback that will bring back their lost reputation.The only problem of the Krist’let’s new home was that it was poor in magic, magic that is known to be vital for these entities.Therefore, most of them weakened, becoming less able of performing powerful spells, spells required to keep them in shape.
Becoming weaker and weaker, they took the name of “the Krat’vars”, swearing that once they’ll come back into the world and their power will be restored, they’ll retake the name of Kris’lets.
For 5,000 years, the Krat’var lived alone in Krenaton, exploiting all of its resources and draining anything that contained magic, leaving just a rocky, deserted realm.Flowers and beast were brought to extinction, rain was no longer a common phenomenon in Krenaton and the sky had now a dark color, filled with monster-shaped clouds that wonder along.
The Krat’var’s only hope is now to find a powerful human, filled with enough magic that when sacrificed at the dark ritual, he will release it on the entire realm, giving enough power to all Krat’vars to begin the Sacred War, mentioned in the ancient scripts.